Short Fantasy Fiction- The Forbidden River




The Forbidden River (By Irfan, Eshana and Jeffy written in 10 min timer) -31/01/2019

There lived a boy with his mother in a village far away. They were very poor and lived on very little means. There came a day when they reached the end of their rations, were starving and had nothing to eat for days.
Out of desperation, the mother asks the boy to go to a secluded and forbidden river where nobody went to, for some reason, to get fish for them to eat. He ventures out in the morning on the journey and on reaching, climbs over the fence around it and walks along the bank. He settles down with his fishing line and waits for a while.
He feels a tug in the line and pulls it out. He saw a beautiful purple fish and to his surprise the fish said, ‘Please don’t kill me, I promise you won’t regret it’. The boy’s stomach grumbles with hunger at the sight of the fish and he kills it anyway. Suddenly as soon as his back is turned, a huge wave of water rises from the river and pulls the boy into the water.
A huge group of armor clad giant fishes began attacking him from all directions and began to wage a war against him. ‘Why did you kill our brother?’ They kept repeating ‘Don’t you know this is forbidden river?’
The boy shuts his eyes and prays, ‘God please save me’ just as a fish thumps his stomach. The honest simple prayer was accepted, heard, and out of no-where Poseidon appeared to help him. He fought for the boy and clothes him with a shiny gold armor encrusted with pearls and crystals.
The boy pushed the fish away as the armor seemed to repel them and swam to the surface. He quickly ran home to him mother and told her what had happened at the river.
His mother said, “God had been good to you, and to us – let’s sell the armor that you got and buy food with it!”. They went to the market, sold the gold armor and with the money were able to live comfortably and never returned to the forbidden river (or ate fish).

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